Everyday A Little Death

I actually like how you kept the bright colors of Edmond Dashie's mane and tail. Like this was at a point just before he really started to lose hope as another day, another week, another month and another year passed. It really speaks a lot about how he went from a sailor with a wrongfully tarnished reputation, hopeful that God would give him justice, to a count who bought, planned and killed for justice.

Also I know you said you wanted a critique, but the usual critique page isn't here? Sorry I couldn't give a full one.